TWTS commentary

[jedi_of_urth]

So for the commentary meme siberia21 requested To Weather the Storm (actually she's requested more than that if the mood strike me and it might). Since I don't know when to shut up the commentary is pretty long and can be found here because I didn't want to attempt to post it to lj.

I'll still take more commentary requests if you've got them.

Comments

[wheatear.livejournal.com]

Ah, I'd forgotten that I beta read that fic for you! Interesting read. :D

[jedi_of_urth]

You did, and while you had some very productive comments that I took to heart as I noted in the commentary) it did convince me that our styles of storytelling didn't mesh well. You're a lot more direct and brief compared to my kind of meandering laid back...atmospheric style (lalalalala when the characters want to get to the point they'll let me know, I'll describe them driving for a few hundred words until they do). There's probably a happy medium but I was of the opinion that it wasn't working out sadly.

[wheatear.livejournal.com]

Lol, you're right, our styles are very incompatible. I'm all about brevity. So yeah, I agree.

[siberia21.livejournal.com]

Wow! Thank you SO much, you made me ridiculously happy. I commented below the commentary, I just had to drop a line here.
You guys are my heroes!:D