This is a good fic, although it feels unfinished, so I'm really wishing you will write someday something more.
There are a lot of issues between them and I love how you're not hiding them. Actually I like the whole 'tone' of this fic ... with the whole hurting, loving , "I don't want to hurt you", "I want to hurt , because I think I deserve it " ...
-------------------------------------------------- I'm real.y awful of commenting and I would normally not, but I saw there was no comments and I thought it would be sad if you thought you messed up with this series ... because you did not!
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There are a lot of issues between them and I love how you're not hiding them. Actually I like the whole 'tone' of this fic ... with the whole hurting, loving , "I don't want to hurt you", "I want to hurt , because I think I deserve it " ...
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I'm real.y awful of commenting and I would normally not, but I saw there was no comments and I thought it would be sad if you thought you messed up with this series ... because you did not!